beats-okay
production need plenty of work
production is horrible - the hook is meh
has a boring type flow. i dont like it that much....sorry.....up ya production skills so its managable....n punch in everynow n then i can tell when your strugglin for breath....'
the ohhs didnt sound convincing....its like you didnt put your all into it....and it came out half assed....and made u sound assed out.....work on this one, you can fine tune it into a hit maybe

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