.... i see u tryin to be creative with punches sort of like what i try to do with mines lol....i say make them more catchy so others can understand them better cause only in "your own mind" can u understand what you talkin bout if u dont break it down...define it...or make it more catchy others wont understand so they'll be like "wtf"...like i understood what u ment by that "half a sandle line"....in my own way when i thought about it....but at the same time its not catchy and it can seem as if it doesn't make sense....people just dont think that way if u see what i mean....ehh dunno if i explained this shit right to u but u might get it lolz.....good shit in all though i liked it 8/10....~1~

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