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Old 08-29-07, 06:16 PM   #11
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Voted For: Sonny Barz.

Doogg im runnin like FEET ON A TRACK/
give you Rosa Park treatment ..take a SEAT IN THE BACK/
no punch or diss... just flowing... eeh

my flows? you cant COMPETE WITH THAT/
and you wouldnt be good with the HEAT, IF YOU PLAYED WITH SHAQ!! (omg) so dont even try cuz u cant STOP MY SENTENCE/
it would of been decent if you put / after shaq fucking idiot....
but WEAK...

im swattin and can DROP FLIES IN IT/
you wouldnt even be stronger if you were POPEYE WITH SPINACH!!/
weak....
so if you win this battle you gone be EARNIN A BEAT SEE/
if i win il be LEARNIN A FREE BE/
WEAK...
you suck so much, you piss more artist off than me illegally BURNING A CD!!/
and our battle is worthless.. so QUIET, CHILL!/ cuz yo lame flows may get votes and people might BUY IT FOREAL/ my lines like fat chicks with burgers, yours would be annarexit girls taking DIET PILLS/ (haha) so maybe if you decide to beat me and RHYME LONG/ imma be refreshin my page, gettin votes and IM GONE!

man im tierd of fixing your fucking structure SHIT IS SO FUCKING PATHIC IT GIVE ME A FUCKING HEAD-ACH...

u had about 2 decent bars that would of been decent if you word it your bars better but since u wanna drag it out and make a punch turn into a filler YOUR VERSE WAS STRAIGHT ASS...

NEXT

Okay yu nice, but don't think ya FLOWS IS NEAR MINES
cuz Sonny'll 'PUT AN END TO FLY' like 'CLOSIN AIRLINES'
ha.. decent start... * you already won this battle*

my SHIT SO DOPE, while u never even SPIT NO QUOTES
think you better? We'll see when u don't GET NO VOTES
aight...
I GRIP THOSE TOAST, and let the ROASTER HIT YA
shots'll 'MOVE E', but i don't mean a MOTION PICTURE!
decent...
my POST'LL SPLIT YA. I'll leave u EASILY SERVED
u cud 'glue dictionary pages to a bat'...
and u still cudn't 'BEAT ME WIT WORDS!'
decent...
Some call u Clova, but this battle, I'ma END THIS SHIT
u may not be CLOVA, but u gon need 1 to WIN THIS SHIT!
HAHA NICE PERSONAL...
and puttin 'CAPS' in ya verses? Thats SO "MY" SHIT
i'd call u a 'FECES THIEF' da way u 'STOLE MY SHIT'
DECENT...
Battle me? You must be one of them DUMB FUCKS
i won 4 times already, and u ain't even WON ONCE!
HA DECENT PERSONAL...
Ya punches ain't hot enough, how u gon FRY ME?
i'll send ya 'SOUL TO DA SKY' and make u 'FLY, E'
aight ending....


ya verse was nice some good punches and alot of good personal and good structure....

9/10 soild verse.....


you should just drop this crew and come holla at me for-real...
but good luck with whatever u do...