Man.. Dopest shit I've ever read...

Seriously.. You have massive potential bro....... Look, I wanna help you out here, you absolutly HAVE to go and rap that verse at an open mic night in your local area... ok?

Dont change a thing, its all perfect.. People will love you... Instant success..

I promise...

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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