Verse 1:
Flow is nice, I hear a lot of internal rhyme but the thing that you have to do is learn how to infect people with your voice. The first thing people hear when you start spittin is your voice and if you don't grab em with it then it makes them not want to listen.

Hook
I defintely like the hook it fits the mood of the track kinda somber but at the same time you hit it with more force than the verse.. the verse should have been spit just like that hook

7/10 good shit though

RTF