for a small cypher verse it sounded nice when i was reading it....sounds like the beginning lines to a freestyle verse that could be worked on....but u said it was suppose to be in the cypher section as a cypher so i give u that....i would like to see a keystyle verse like 10-20 lines in the open mics though with some creativity put in it.....~1~

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