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Old 09-13-07, 08:23 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Young Fear
My eyes close
All around darkness is all I see/
Not dead, I still bleed/
Consieve thoughts/
pains percieved/
No one left to be but me/
But who's that without the habit/
let it spin out of control, now no chance to grab it/
dagnabbit
from screaming my pain my throat has gone horse/
I let life run its course/
Now my skins coarse on my walking corpse/
A broken heart has got me warped/
My loss hurt more than any sentence given in court/
How can I stand as a man
when my heart is in pieces/
Pain is brought upon yourself is my thesis/
please believe it
Cause I do, in my life pain is all ive felt/
And now I know That I brought it all upon myself/

heres the links:


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3183313

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3183314



my bad for sleepin... but u know how it is on RV now days.....anyways.....nice little piece foreal i think this one of the best ive seen from u in all it was a smooth read.....keep it up and keep elevating ....~1~
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