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Old 09-17-07, 02:06 PM   #11
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Banned: Biting
 
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Feed off my punch, na Foo' ill feed it to you, right through ya front two, you worthless,
sadly its true, you got SHIT for an avatar, and thats suppose to be a reflection of you, perfect!

1st line: the set up was a bit streched you could of shorten it and would of flow better
2ed line: the avy an shit thing was clever and decent again a bit strech but made sense the way u word it....

decent drop...

Fuck Aurora, this kid drops as stretched as the Sky,
Make you're name as nice as you want..
......................we still don't like viewing your lines.

1st line: im feeling the concept and creativeness on the set up nice job...
2ed line: a bit streched an was less effective then the actual set up which killed the damage level u could of cused....

winner: sky
because he punch had a set up line that was decent and the punch coinnected just as good or a bit better shall i say...
the other dude killed hes prefect set up line with a weak punch....
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