Flyweight
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decent ish here......was very poetic.....i got the flow down on this one so kudos....as far as ur content, nothin amazin.....u painted a picture that didnt have a shyt load of color and wasnt detailed.....meanin u gotta dig a lil deeper......think of what the reader needs to see.....i see what u mean but i wanna SEE it
coo shyt tho
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