ok not bad... but ive seen u do better... this is pretty much basic...some of the lines are played too... u gotta get more creative...these are the lines i liked the most...

bin through some rough times yea but still got through
u think i care about u after the shit u said and do
my heads to big for you try try to understand it
and it's so fuckin sick someone should try to bann it

those were original... no hate hommie keep posting.