Not to be dissin or anything but i thought both structures were really bad and neither punch was hitting. you guys gotta work on making your bars shorter and right to the punch. try removing words or re-wording it to make it shorter. also, you dont need any "quotations" or CAPS in it to emphasize two things together, write it out so that we can understand the punch without that, if you understand.

I thought you guys were both pretty even, but not so much in a good way. however, i feel that if i had to pick which was better id say aphill's took it by a hair. take my advice and come harder next week boys, word.

v/ aphill..........