I'll break down your verse.
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call me the lyrical mineral,
i got the most style and plenty of potential,

wtf is a lyrical mineral? What is the virtue of a mineral being lyrical? Why would you be called a lyrical mineral? Mineral and potential barely even rhyme.

my lyrics combined with this game r a needed essential,
u cant take my words cuz ur the lowest of the minimal,

Not only does that not make sense, it implies that you are essential to rap, when obviously it has been around for years before you started doing it.

my behavior is the worst of the cynical,
u can try stealin these lines,
i got many more but keep them confidential,
they r so powerful they can start an influential rap attack,

-_-

a presidential impeachment and vote for the Big D or Ric B,
we the smartest and illest, our style is the chillest,
u can try to beat it but u'll never fulfill this,

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we're unique like an abstract artist,
u can never step into our scene,
try ur hardest but u'll never get close,
it'll all be a dream and invisible like a ghost,

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we the hardest ever and we bringin it down together,
lyrical master minds from january to december,

I guess that makes sense..

my lyrics r so accurate like a bulls eye with a dart,
the doctors and masters of the hip-hop art,
me and Ric B r the owners, ya better check billboards top 100 soon,
cuz we gonne be on top of the charts.

I doubt that even had a flow.




good?

No! So stop acting like you're the most amazing thing in the world and start working on your rapping. You can pop off bullshit about how you're making a rap group and your going to change the world and you can smoke anybody in a battle since you've improved a lot, but that shit doesn't mean a single thing. It doesn't change the fact that you can't even rap decently yet. Less talking, more practicing.

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