derek heres a tip.

if u have to give a lengthy explanation for one of ur lines. ur better of not using it. cuz if u cant get to ur point in ur lines. then ur point just isnt worth getting to ya dig?

and using big words=shit...making sense and opening up peoples ears=goldmine.

dont just use big words becuz other people do...

if u want ur own style, u gotta find wut ur good at...u gotta find how u can express ur self with music and make sense.

u cant just use big words and be like....yo hocus pocus my rhymes be like supercalafragalisticexpaladocious

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