hmmm u need to work on your structure....write in lines/bars and dont
stretch them....like this

you know : we hear alot of shit,
but we know those who choose that are full of it
so dont react,let them spit
then we see who want abit(of the game)!!!

^^^^those are your first 4 lines....its easier to read like this


seems like you forcing what u wanna put down....take it easy and think about what u putting down.....then read what u got down to see if it sounds good to u...then edit....be simple if u have to but dont be too basic and still get the point across....keep workin on it man.....~1~

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