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Old 09-27-07, 02:19 PM   #10
don cardyac
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vs.foo- the line made plenty of sense, it was formatted well and flowed well. not really personal but it was good. decent.
vs. skaal-
line is too played. erytime i've seen a 3 way battle somebody has used that line b4. not so good.

overall- y'all all had one good line and one not so good line each. but the one that hit the hardest was...

SKALL cuz he had the hardest hitting line in the battle.

foo
vs.spek- that line is used too much.people who dont even rap use that. its not even really a punchline, its more like a comment the way that'chu formatted it.

vs.skaal- it was a good line.it was personal & flowed well. only advice is that'chu take the s off of the end of orioles cuz it would be like sayin' "or he'llS lose" see what i mean? but overall it was good.

skall
vs.spek- the line was formatted and flowed right but it was just kinda corny. it made sense but it just wasn't funny or hard-hitting.

vs.foo- not personal. but it was great wordplay throughout the whole 2 lines. well done.
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