word... this is pretty basic rhyming skills.. u can do better if u take the time to read wut u are writing and edit ur structure a bit... also look at other raps or listen to other flows and u can try to flow like one of those.. im not saying to bit but use those rhymes in ur own meaning and terms. change there meaning of how the first rapper used them and use them in ur own words... keep coming kid we all here to elevate

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