aphillyate's line was funny and made sense and it was personal with the backwards nameplay. only thing wrong is that it wasn't structured as a punchline which made it like kinda simple. but it was good anyway.

k-m's line made sense and was structured well but it was just kinda overexplained and it wasn't personal at all.

v-aphill.....

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