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Old 09-29-07, 09:43 AM   #13
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like my emphasized words, ya boy bliss could get CAPPED quicked/
but "BLISS" couldn't touch me wit' "TECK's or TEXT" usin' the chapstick/

1st line: decent flow and set up...
2ed line: decent punch but i think you word it wrong thou or could of re-word it to hit harder....


i go straight for the heart, you can tell dons weak and wont last
i'd give cardyac arrest... but he still wouldn't have a decent attack

1st line: decent set up flow smooth...
2ed line: decent punch word it pretty good and decent hit...


winner: bliss
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