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Old 10-02-07, 08:07 AM   #8
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Adam
 
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2v
He thought I wasn't willin' to deck herbs, aiyo I bet you DJ's clothin is checkered..
I broke this bitches nails with my jaw now how the fuck will he scratch the record?
I dig the word play, I personally haven't seen it used before in this context. Good drop.


DJ-Sydm
Man, Im not Ransum, I dont just throw a punch, I land one, meet ya death on a gurney,
less than so-so, first dude ive ever met to post 2 verses and lose to a NO-SHOW in a Tourny!
I hated the set up to this punch, I dunno man, not digging it. But for real dude, I'm not trying to cut you down, just advice, but punches like this are so over done man. I mean cool it's a personal, but I used shit like in the 1-2 League 2 years ago against KORV battlers. Drop something original that nobody has seen before, that's where it's at.

I gotta take 2v on this mates.
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