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Old 10-03-07, 10:24 AM   #14
Ransum
Banned: Biting
 
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He thought I wasn't willin' to deck herbs, aiyo I bet you DJ's clothin is checkered..
I broke this bitches nails with my jaw now how the fuck will he scratch the record?

1st line: i like the flow and set up was pretty good...
2ed line: how u brake someone nails with ya jaw??... but the rest made sense pretty much but i thought the 1st half didnt make sense you could of re-worded that to make it hit harder....

vs

Man, Im not Ransum, I dont just throw a punch, I land one, meet ya death on a gurney,
less than so-so, first dude ive ever met to post 2 verses and lose to a NO-SHOW in a Tourny!

before i give my feed back on this.. Fuck You Cuz my punches land to if you dont get it then Fuck You... lol... just some aggression i had to let lose....

1st line: decent flow and set up...
2ed line: LMFAO... nice personal... and i thought good punch as-well...

winner: DJ for a good soild personal punch...

best battle i've read so far gon-grats fellas...
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