I'm not gonna reply to that haters remark...
I liked the poem, the girl was pretty too
For the poem, the vocabulary was big, a mark of intellegence mos def but, (you can call me stupid if you want to) I really feel like it takes away from the poem when huge words are put side by side throughout the whole thing. It makes a person contantly have to go back and think, "ok, what does that mean again?" I liked the 3 lines where you wrote "and I re..." that was good. I just didn't like the big words, I don't want you to think that I'm "hating" on you or anything, I don't want you to think I'm stupid either, I understand the words, I just think they take away from what the peice could be. I had a friend who did the same thing and it took him forever to realize what I was talking about.