it took me a sec to pick up on the flow of this one, actually I don't think I did until I stopped looking for one and just read it, y'na? But I did like it, the bars messed me up for the first half of it, I couldn't find any. I think I was looking for something that maybe you intentionally left out? If you did that on purpose it was genious and even if you didn't it was good to stumble upon... I liked this peice a lot