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whas going on man...
yo you kept this interesting till the end, shit was tight, no doubt, the concept of it is pretty simple but the way you write it all down, using good word play, makes it more complex and gives strengh to the whole concept, cause it's pretty simple to sum up; some girls dared you to clim up a poll, you climed, you bust your ass when you fell... simple... but you make tha shit sound interesting through out... thas kinda hard to do... shit was nice man...
Peace
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