You wanted a break down, so here.

Ransum
this homo got cases pending for sperm bank EMBEZLEMENT...
told the cops he couldnt REMEMBER SHIT... an then got cought try'in to swallow the EVIDENCE...

First off, if you need to capitalize your rhymes to make them stand out you're already off to a bad start. Secondly, if you're going to draw attention to a word, make sure you spell it correctly (Embezzlement). You can call that an invalid point if you'd like, but when it comes to text, structure, the way you emphasize things and spelling are important. Anyways, back to your attempt at something. "told the cops he couldnt REMEMBER SHIT..." <- That's just filler with a some words that rhyme at the end of it, adds nothing to the punch and actually stretches it out too much in the end. "an then got cought try'in to swallow the EVIDENCE..." <- So your punch is basically saying: "Blisss swallows." There isn't any word play, name play or personal at all in the punch, it's just a basic, unintelligent bar.


Blisss
beefing with the mod eh, but really son, let me tell you the truth
you couldn't have gotten that w... if 2v put it together for you

"beefing with the mod eh, but really son, let me tell you the truth" <- Now, starts his punch off with a recent personal (last week), and sets up well for the next line because you actually want to read what he has to say. "you couldn't have gotten that w..." <- more personal because Ransum lost the battle last week. "if 2v put it together for you" <- The name of the mod and person Ransum is beefing with along with some intelligent wordplay. In the end, good personal, good word play, easy win. Nice drop.

So in the end..

Vote: Blisss