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Old 10-06-07, 05:45 PM   #2
Jay Rose
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go check out my emo rap thread.....holla.....ima do somethin no one does anymore leave feed:


i like the screw style on this beat...its a lil empty....i feel like a lil more could benifit it alot but its good


your verse is simple...which makes in genius....you didnt overwork the beat....it helped what you were saying hit harder....tho it dont sound like your usual mixing...its a lil more hallow then you usually bring it....prolly my speakers for real tho....the second guy had good character on the mic....it seemed like he got lost a lil bit...like his direction but its good for what it is.....

somethin id bump but would get old quick.....the beat is too repatitive.....good shit for a preformance tho....like 2nd or 3rd song in a 6 song set.....holla at my shit....yep yep
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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