This was.. alright. Lol @ the change in usage of language. Some alright ideas and such, no real story, lots of random talking so I assume you were just venting. Overall it was almost worth the read, but not quite, and some-what. Feel me?
I like some of your word choosing , though, and next time you should attempt more intelligent multies.
Here, hit this:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244297