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Old 10-18-07, 08:57 AM   #5
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Banned: Biting
 
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I wont even ASK.Y you rap, cuz ya shits extinct like a MAMOUTH
Matta fact,DJ how bout you listen ta ya own name
.................................................. .............and SHUT YO' DAMN MOUTH!

1st line: flow aight and decent set up.. sorda a punch to as-well...
2ed line: aight flow.. a bit personal but lacking impack on the punch and sorda force as-well mamouth and danm mouth dont really flow good but then again every punch dont have to rhyme as-long as it connects good which this one didnt really connect that good...


Mys' can't stic a punch, Nobody wants to see me in a 'bout with him'
cause if he lasts more than a second its cause the ref had to count to 10!

1st line: a bit of word-play and a aight flow decent set up...
2ed line: flow aight a bit more creative and decent punch not the hardest punch but a decent one that hit harder...


winner: dj
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