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Old 10-19-07, 10:19 AM   #6
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Banned: Biting
 
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Y'all want skills? You can ask any of these amateur-types emergin'
but their lips are sealed, and this prima donna's like a virgin

1st line: decent flow an set up...
2ed line: eeh not a hard punch nor that creative to me but ok...


No one wanna see ya face, u UGLY, get a freakin clue
Even Ash Ketchum wouldn't wanna take a Pikachu

1st line: decent flow an set up... ( but why freak'in insted of fucking? sound kind sweet there )
2ed line: decent word-play an punch... not the best but decent and was more effective here...


winner: jtr
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