shyyyytt im feelin this.....love the punches....and the wordplay on the some of these.... structure looked a lil messy....and flow was stretched in a lot of places for me but the focus was on the wordplay and punches


Show'in groupies the Major Paine like the movie with Damon Wayans...
(like the concept, delivery was off a milli inch......I wouldve said...."SOME Major Paine")

I've torn Karma... rock'in gear like Thor's armor...
(feelin this too.....if u know comics and pay attention to detail......Thors armor has ROCKS in it....nice wordplay)

The drug-party blood donor... drunk..hardly hung-over with Bacardi gun-holsters...
The trigger gets two thumbs up like Atari controllers...
(feelin these two together.......Bacardi = hung over....holsters= are hung over when worn...and if ur a gamer like myself.....when holdin atari controllers....yes ur thumbs pretty much are point up, i like these two...good comparisons here and imagination)

Five days in the darkness... I'm Pai Mei with the parchment...
I write flames in the Arctic Ice Age when I spark shit...
While Christ's save'in the heartless with knife-blades in his armpits...
(multis and flow right here noted......i like the last line, outlandish)

the humpty dumpty line was coo as well....yea some good shyt in here all around