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Old 10-19-07, 12:56 PM   #459
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No one wanna see ya face, u UGLY, get a freakin clue
Even Ash Ketchum wouldn't wanna take a Pikachu

1st line: decent flow an set up... ( but why freak'in insted of fucking? sound kind sweet there )

Freakin flows better than fucking in this situation, read it over a few times and then read it with "fucking" dubbed in there and you'll see what I mean..

Anyways..


"Try not to curse it hurts the verse, it proves that you got a strong lack of better words." - Slug
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