Thread: DJ-Sydm vs F.oo
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Old 10-21-07, 09:26 PM   #30
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Voted For: F.oo

Foo - Ur verse was alright I guess, but wording is killing your punches from landing. The first bar woulda been better with the 3 line style and the rest. The closer u coulda done much more with than the "even ur old name is confused thing" Alright verse tho.

DJ - First off, u need to develop a consistent rhyme scheme for ur shit to be effective in text. Anyway, u didn't really have much in terms of punches.. i mean the dog has his day thing with vick is played, the redbull thing is played, just wasn't anything harsh in here.

Vote - F.oo