rhyme schyme pretty basic... some rhymes didnt rhyme at all or were like forced... or u tryed to rhyme it more then it should... instead of 1 bar u mad 1.5bars and then it would have lost flow... u know? overall pretty basic stuff and could use some improvement... not bad.. but not greatness either.. keep workin on it.. keep it comin fams

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