ok scanz, take a breathe...they weren't preaching about their lifes. they were writing to the fuckin topic. AKA TOPICAL....jesus.

well Sonny, ur shit was okay...felt ur shit was a little basic but on point..deffinitley had the strongest verse out of all 3. Don't really like the whole capital letters with the - signs
that syle is played and old. other than that...u had a good verse ...thought ur rhyme scheme was basic...u went to the topic good...

favorite lines :

"I'll admit, I never was that DRUG-DEALER-WIT-CRACK
I been a boss. Man, I got DRUG-DEALERS-FOR-THAT!
I'll SHINE-THE-PIECE only in the TIME-OF-BEEF
but other than that, i'm on da grind TRYNA-EAT. "

AB: ur verse was good...i felt u had a short verse..but it pretty much stayed on point to the topic...short but sweet man..u structure was kinda fucked..but thte flow still came ....nice job.

Fly-not really feelin this..ur flow was deffinitley off...ur not really on topic...no hate just feel u needa elevate drastically...


keep it up guys

probably 5/10 for real....

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