man i try to make ya listen but all ya jus hooked on dissin,
i love to ryhme+write,fuck thats y i joined this site.
if i give it go,2 u it sounds slow!
but dont hate on it,put ur name on it,
give me a hand,on the shit i dont understand.
iv got the flow,but my structure is a no,
jus abit of advice and my shit will blow,ya know.
1st things first il get a story to my verse,
my word play is too basic,but i can make it...........
better!! like learning how to get a woman alittle wet'er,
practice,this is a fact this!!!
more time,more effort,this must be a definate.....
2 succeed,give me wot i need and i'll open myself up and plant that seed!