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Voted For: SickHead.
One of the better battles I've seen around. Lemme break it down:
T-Lite: Your rhyme layout is effective, but a few lines rhyme better when spoken, it's tough in text to express that. The punches were good, you hit his style early on. You have multiple word sound combinations that work wonders against rookies, but you gotta combine them with bigger words, make it more complex. A hot verse, and I appreciate the Metal Gear Solid reference.
Score- 8.5
SickHead: Your complexity keeps you afloat. Your lines are fairly simple in terms of word choice, current event hits are always a nice laugh, but you have to hit his style/mannerisms/crew or anything personal. Bar the first two lines, this could be about anyone. You still got rookie tendencies, explaining punches and whatever, but you got skill.
Score: 9
Like I said, a much better battle than I been seeing.
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