Voted For: Ransum

Not impressed. Rookie at best.

Ransum: You attempt to use big ideas for nice setups, but it comes off weak. Archaeologist line was easily the most solid line in the whole verse. Not a strong drop at all, typical standard issue rhymes.
Score: 5

Mystic City: Please stop explaining your punches. Not that strong, and none of them really needed explaining. Keyboard on fire? Ancient. Try to keep your syllable count per line similar.
Score: 2.5

Much love, try again folks.

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