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Old 11-08-07, 11:24 PM   #35
HELLonEARTH
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Voted For: K.MurD3r

Hmmm.

Spoken1/Provoked: Decent verse. Mildly entertaining punches to start, but it got reallllly weak son. Drag Queen? Stablizers? Really? Like, seriously? Come on now. Make it more personal. Try harder.
Score: 4

K.MurD3r: Funny lines, much more comfortable punches, a lot of personals. Just a solid verse. Done well. Multiple syllable rhyme scheme. Very good.
Score: 7

Sweep. Easily.
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