Hell Ain't Got Nothing On Me
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Voted For: Money Staxx
Faded, old punches dominate this match.
Fly-E: Your form is confusing at points. You jump verse styles constantly, and in text battles, it's tough to follow.You say your own name in your verse more than his. That's not right. Hit him personally, I can't stress this enough. Come on now. Descent multi's and some other funny lines kept you afloat.
Score: 4
Money Staxx: You stayed under the required amount, you hit him pretty hard, played on his name just a little, and had some punches I haven't heard before, though they are weak at best. Work on your line length, try to keep syllable count similar. Salad bar line kept me interested.
Score:5
Much love. Keep it up.
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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing
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