like you said, it's short, but it made an impact... this verse was hot man, no doubt, it ain't really topical or nothing like that... but it shows you got skill, nice flow, wordplay, all of that... just straight spittin' and you pull it of pretty well...
Keep it up man... you could try that topical shit an try to spread a messege or idea or something.... but it's up to you... this shit was pretty good non the less...

Peace