Thread: Lmfao.. crews..
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Old 11-11-07, 10:27 PM   #21
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Originally Posted by F.oo
Hahaha fucking homos with their crew dissing OM's.. pff check out the drunk F.oo..

Only two active crews fronting hard on this old washed up site,
So watch me run through these dumb fucks like I do yellow lights.
Don't even put a fight, I'm not threated by 300 fags with e-gats,
And then we got "The B.E.S.T CREW" on RV..
........................................just here to give us some laughs.
Seriously, you're all fucking whack and your rosters are weak,
And I come half-joking, but you still want my tongue-in your cheeks.
For real, there's not point in bringing all your flaws right across you,
'Cause I could just say "you're whack" and it'd apply to both of your rosters.
Don't even bother replying, this quick ten owns anything you call a verse
I'll only waste 15 minutes, you'll spend a week just to drop something worse.



^This for real?! I hope F.oo was completely shit faced.. Cause if he was even just a bit coherent.. I have no respect for this..



Barely any multi usage.. and most of the rhyme schemes were forced as fuck
(Example: "across you & rosters".. Don't rhyme or count as a multi)

Wordplay was.. well.. pretty much non-existant..


IDK about personals, cause IDK most a yall..
(I'll let this catagory slide for that reason)

The punches were.. Well ineffective & weak..
(Example: "Don't even bother replying, this quick ten owns anything you call a verse
I'll only waste 15 minutes, you'll spend a week just to drop something worse")

^That REALLY could have had some wordplay or metas or ANYTHING integrated into it..

Metas were.. Well.. damn near non-existant.. Exept some played crap..
(Example: "Run through them like yellow lights")


Ugh.. Fuck it.. I'm not even gonna waste my time going on.. This was horrid..

3/10 (Thats generously giving an extra point out of pitty..)
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