Aye...this was most definetly a raw yet well 'turned' (or should i say 'churned'?!) out piece...

...the simplicity of some of the ways you formulated it only masked the slightly complex, but certainly in depth piece that is was...

....i really like how you played on the topic though....reveresing it in the end to hit the other way....showing the lesson "two wrongs dont make a right" (well most of the time they don't)...and the importance of forgivness (even though one must search deep inside for that, but a primary indication of forgivness would hold good steed till then...)...well those, amongst other things...

...done with your usual dark and gritty imagery and overall 'essence' if you would...

...anyway, i liked it...a lot....good structure...strong-ish vocab used to good effect....and the overall execution being very good...

....respect...