Actually nevermind...I found it.

Okay...

Beat is decent...a little too hyper for me.

Vocal quality is terrible...you sound pretty stuffed up, which in turn, ruins the delivery. You are pretty monotonous to begin with.

Actually, you remind me of when I started recording. Decent lyrics, but off flow terribly. And I think I maybe heard you stutter a few times...if you have to redo a take, it is usually worth it. It will make you sound more professional, and give you some positive points about your track. Practice makes perfect, and perfection is where you want to be. Do you want people to hear you stutter, or hear the perfect track every time they hear it?

Overall, I think you do have a future. But it is a long road, and it won't happen overnight.

Keep doing it man. The worst thing you can do is give up.

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