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IP:
You gotta work on your lyrics bro...
I think youd benefit from working on beats with a faster tempo... As it stands, some people have the voice for those slow bpm instrumentals and some people just sound fucked...
Lyrics though for you is a biggie.............some of those lines were weak as hell my friend... What I suggest.........is you sit there and write a 100 bar track and try to elevate with your multies and flow...
Not trying to be rude.......just trying to help you improve.....
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