Originally Posted by Nostradamus

You gotta work on your lyrics bro...

I think youd benefit from working on beats with a faster tempo... As it stands, some people have the voice for those slow bpm instrumentals and some people just sound fucked...

Lyrics though for you is a biggie.............some of those lines were weak as hell my friend... What I suggest.........is you sit there and write a 100 bar track and try to elevate with your multies and flow...

Not trying to be rude.......just trying to help you improve.....

Originally Posted by JPoll

hey, where you livin now? i'm still in the windy city (lethbridge, the real windy city) for another semester anyways.

I like this song man...quality is really good...i like your voice on faster songs, i'd like the flow a lot but it comes a little short...like you the pauses aren't distinguished because of your rhyme scheme. I'm really liking this though the more i listen. Voice is good...presence is upped, but delivery is still a tad less then what you could do though.
We still have to meet up and collab

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message me what you think of the new rough cuts if you have a minute.
peace