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Old 11-26-07, 03:22 PM   #4
Jay Rose
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i like the verse..... i like the beat......


i dont like the verse with the beat......

i dunno i think you tried to ride the high hat or somethin...didnt sound right....the panio or strings should go along with the flow in this one....the hook was mixed weird couldnt even tell what it was....

all in all nothing bad here, just doesnt work for me tho....get what im sayin?
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dad said, son you're fucking high
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three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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