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Old 11-26-07, 03:26 PM   #22
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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yea...only thing i have to say is watch out with the way your sayin things....toward the end starts to take a monotone vibe to it....nyg n phenom got it right tho....clean up a few things smooth it out....n swtich some shit up, n your good to go
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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