I see dumb people
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bored so might as well
hook pretty cool. Vocals should be upped tho. But dude did pretty nice job. Your flow was a bit choppy, vocals maybe could be upped bit too. 2nd verse flow started out kinda ehh, but emotion pretty cool. lyrics seem cool. The "If that's love" part in 2nd verse near end was good idea. But you should of punched in the "if that's love", because you seemed to be rushing in words. The third verse, or bridge or w/e. Unclear what you was saying, and didn't sound too good.
overall it was decent track tho.
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