Originally Posted by Ransum

Voted For: .Poetic.

battle me ull get smoked i bet it/
this guy aint poetic/
his throats infected/
one thing off back... make ya bars longer this is to short but if u make it longer it would be better you would of had 2 bars of multis if you fix your structure...
from all the coke injected/
ur respond will be delayed/
ur gunna replay, ur verse for 3 days/
u better be brave, because ur dealing with B.K./
this mans a bitch yo/
i saw him holding mans hands in sanfrancisco/
ull never be sick yo/
the closest ull get 2 fame is sucking my dick bro/
ur gay soft and flop/
u need 2 lay off my cock/
b4 i spray off my glock/

you had no good punches if any at all..
your flow was the best thing.. work on fixing your structure before you drop another battle verse...


dance with the devil son cus im'a burn ya and leave my prints..
so since your "new to rv" im'a spread you wide a dick this bitch!!
WEAK AND GAY...
difference is kid while im "half assing" this verse your tryin an it's still shit!
you down for that Cunt Pokin huh?..
why didn't you say so man? im already givin it to ya jus call me daddy..
WEAK...
cus i'll bury you 6 Feet deep next to Rv's vet C.A.L.I!!
Elavation herb! you couldn't score a verse even god himself immersed in your words!
Dont Rhyme.. but the 2ed line the follow was decent...
it hurts kids like you man I break em in line for line bar for bar already jus peep you record!


yo fix ya strucutre the shiit all fucked up...
ya punches was weak as hell..
you only had 1 decent line AND THATS IT...

its a shame and you claim to be good LMFAO I'll Murder you in a battle...

but i aint starting noting just saying...


you win only because of a decent line...

what a shame...