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ehh pretty weak man..i found that you didnt put alot of imagery into this nah meen just didnt add up quite well..the expressing of the topic was well done but theres a few flas in your setups..multies need to be worked on..wordplay could have been progressed..as wellas devine imagery so the reader can see what your talking about..
any way good job..
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