shits pretty deep bro i like what u were gettin at but there comes a point when it seems like ur trying a lil to hard to be all philosophical and shit but fuk if thats how u feel lay that shit down....as long as you get out wat ur trying to say thats all that matters get yah point across how u fell is best....as for how i think you should get it across goes like this trim it down sum try not to force so many lines and you'll be all good keep droppin..amd remember constant elevation is keeeeeeeyyyyy!